Peer Review worksheet

1)  The first paragraph gives a brief summary of Alice in Wonderland and how these disorders are common to humans but not really animals. Then it goes into the White Rabbit and the definition of GAD. The first sentence is very broad to the book Alice in Wonderland in general. I doubt it’s an attention-getting sentence but it does introduce the meaning behind Alice in Wonderland.

2)  A thesis statement has to be the main argument about what your paper is going to be about. It’s like an introduction to your body paragraphs. My thesis can be more specific about what my point of the Whit Rabbit it.

3)  Yes you can identify the main ideas of each paragraph because it’s the first sentence and it sums up what the paragraph is going to be about.tye main concepts explored in this paper are the symptoms of GAD and a brief explanation how it relates to the White Rabbit by using quotes. Each paragraph does not make a relevant point that has been covered. The main conclusions are how each symptom connects with the White Rabbit due to his actions and how it affects not only himself but others too. At the last sentence of my conclusion it also states that the White Rabbit is not the only one with a disorder.

4)  There are some run-o sentences where their needs to be a period to start a new sentence. Also some word-use can be necessary throughout my essay.

5)  It states the number page of each quote. It can be more into a paper reference format I suppose.

6)  Using quotes as back-up to support the main idea in each paragraph. My conclusion sums up what my whole main argument is about and how it shows so many psychological issues.